Monday, April 13, 2009

Are they real?

When one dies, where does he go?
Does he leave his body and turn into something else?
Or does he decide to stay in that body trapped forever.
Most spirits decide to leave their body,
But yet they don’t know where to go.
Lost, angry, afraid, and misguided.
Within years, they might even grow violent,
It drives them crazy how alone they really are.
When a human encounters one of these beings,
They seem to be afraid,
But afraid, is actually what the spirit is feeling.
No one really understands them,
I guess I don’t either.
They’re usually born by violent deaths.
Or revenge on the people that hurt them.
“Unfinished business”
They can’t let go of their loved ones.
How do you think angry spirits are born?

14 comments:

  1. Cool Poem Maribel.
    I love it!!!!!
    lOl its really cool.
    :]

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  2. i like you poem. it's dark and really good.

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  3. Wow Maribel Your story is Nice I really like it :)

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  4. cool things about the dead people

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  5. nice i like it and i think they are real

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  6. NiCE MARiBlE i liKE iT iS REAlly NiCE =]
    AWSOME

    -*HONEyCOMBz

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  7. Woah thats deep nothing i saw was bad very good yet disturbing in some way...

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  8. Really nice i liked it. Good job Maribel. Keep up the good work!

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  9. it was really good. good job. :)

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  10. good job maribel i like your poem.. not alot of people dont understand when they are misguided, lost, afraid or anngry..

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  11. I really liked it and the ending was great!

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  12. WOW REALLY DARK AND COOL POEM MARIBEL!
    NICE JOB**

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